All Comments on 'When Plans Change'

A very interesting start.

I think the next episode would be worth it.

HP

Damn Sam that was awesome !

I received a few private comments asking if this story was real. Yes and no. The boyfriend frustration is real, but I'm using creative license in my depiction of him. As for Jae...I will say the feelings are very real.

Also...I am new to writing. As you can see I tried it a few years ago and got mixed reviews. If I get a favorable response I may feel encouraged to continue. ;)

Very good start..hope you do another chapter. Sounds like the boyfriend needs a liven up. Would be good if she did let him know what she did while he was fishing with his brother.

Waiting for the next chapter...***** stars in hope you'll continue your tale.

Nice start - I'd love to see where this leads. :) ~ L

I like this story n I went n read ur old one 2. They r both good but this one is better. Sequel please!

Great start! Please post more and a little longer

You definitely should finish this story. At least give us another chapter.

I appreciate all of your comments and emails. I just submitted chapter 2 and I hope you will enjoy it. Continue to send me helpful tips that will assist me in becoming a better writer.

All the best!

Tara

So sweet and wonderful. But you left me hanging!!!

I really enjoyed your story! Reminds me of myself when I was first attracted to a woman.

Just when you need it most

Inconsiderate of him for changing plans without letting the main character know - but his trepidation was warranted - Jae took advantage of the main character's emotional distress and ate her fish taco.

It's not out of bounds to have these doubts. Men can say the same "that they are not in the prowl for all women" - yet if this was true then all restrooms and locker rooms would be unisex. In other words sapphic girls are not immune from leering at sexy women.