All Comments on 'When Taken at the Flood Pt. 02A'

You usually mention possible breeding once or twice in your stories. I hope you will add a lot more about this in future stories - let the woman really worry about getting knocked up!

THIS WAS A HOOT! 5 stars

Thank you anonymous reader - your comment is much appreciated! I must say, I thought this story was one of my better ones, and I've always been a bit sad it didn't attract much readership. But positive feedback is very encouraging to receive.

auhound49, sadly I missed your comment two years ago. Pregnancy risk is one of my favorite themes too, and it's in the back of my mind in almost everything I write. But I know it's a love/hate thing for people, and I enjoy variety, so I try not to go down that avenue every time. Most of all, it needs to feel compatible with the plot and characters that I have in mind. In "When Taken," for example, I definitely wanted it to be there, but it just didn't seem right for either of the women involved. But I will certainly keep working it into my stories on a regular basis (was toying with one only today...)

Great story! It was a nice twist having alternate endings - very original. I enjoyed both versions!