All Comments on 'When the Holstaurs Come Home'

More please. 4 stars

I liked this over all, it was sort of cute, but felt way too rushed. If I read it right this whole story takes place within 24 - 48 hours. Would love more build up, more characterization for Cassidy and Logan. Why are these monsters outlaws? Why are they so feared? Stuff like that. And them "falling in love" so fast felt odd. Like i said, good start and interesting foundation, but this needs more substance.

Quick, Concise, and Lovely!

10/10!!!!!