All Comments on 'When the Sister-in-law Visits Pt. 02'

Great story…. Looking forward to more. However, I was disappointed to learn that Chloe was on the pill. I was kinda hoping that he might wind up with two pregnant sisters, and Cloe a permanent member of their household and relationship.

Had to, despite the fun story line, give this an 'Average' Three ( 3 ) due to the overy repetitious verbage.

Proof Reading might help this aspect stick out and offer an opportunity to stream line the story.

Great story, fun times ahead for these three.

I liked this story specifically because everybody was aware of what was going on. It bothers me when people are dishonest with someone they claim to love, so the "I set you up" twist was very welcomed. If you're open to a proofreader/editor for the next chapter, send me a message. Thanks for sharing, and I hope there's more to come!

Looking forward to more exciting stories from you🤗😅