All Comments on 'When the Wife Comes Home...'

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Mrhappy4aaMrhappy4aaover 1 year ago

Worthless POS sniveling cuck story. Apparently, he has no balls and she wears the pants in the marriage. There is no story here just junk about a pitiful wimp and his slutty wife. There is nothing to like here, especially the characters.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 1 year ago

Dude, you’re turned on by a mid 30’s man reading an erotic story?

Do yourself and is a favour: don’t use second person pov!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No real man would put up with crap like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dickhead🤷🏻‍♂️

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Well there was a complete cut and paste or in your homosexually driven story cum and taste.

Gee, you know who you write like?

tralan69ertralan69erover 1 year ago

second person pov sucks.

Not read, not scored.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

2nd person POV sucks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, just wait until she has a gangbang with a bunch of black construction guys with 12" cocks. Her husband will be drained of cum for at least one week, maybe two. Oh, and without condoms either.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stop wasting our time with this crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great, More parts please.

26thNC26thNCover 1 year ago

You cuck author’s are a real waste of oxygen. What a pathetic fantasy.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 1 year ago

Don't write in the second person, especially if you're going to write be as a cheating, cuckolding slut.

ted2874ted2874over 1 year ago

Please continue

MarkT63MarkT63over 1 year ago

I really hate CUCK stories...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pitiful!!!

tralan69ertralan69erover 1 year ago

Second person pov sucks.

I don't wear high heels and I don't wear panties.

TRY AGAIN

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

BS to any Guy who would put up with that! If it was My wife she would have found all the Locks changed and everything she had would be in the Gutter I understand the swinging Life style but to let this happen took away this Guys Man Card!

StubbyoneStubbyoneabout 1 year ago

Well written. You have a talent for writing an extremely exciting erotic story. Evidently you also have a talent for attracting assholes, evidenced by the number of derogatory comments I read. Amazing that so many read a complete story in loving wives then complain that it contains content that is clearly hinted at right in the description. Pay no attention to those dumb bells. They just finished beating off to your story and now feel guilty about it. Please keep writing. I know you have more gems hidden in that wonderfull mind ! 4-😊😊😊😊’s

because he didn’t eat her or fuck her after her tryst.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Can we have a new category for cuck crap? Please?? There are precious few stories out there where the MC kills, seriously injured and/or professionally ruins the guy or guys involved with wifey. Wish there were more “burn the bitch-burn the bull” plots! This tale belongs in a special category for moronically wimpy hubbies!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Only one acceptable plot-line for a “when wife comes home from a date” tale: “…funny, Joe’s car isn’t in the driveway. And why doesn’t my fey work?”

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