by amisubmissive
Stories written from the submissive's point of view are always dear to my heart. Perhaps a glimpse into the other side of the slash. So many wonderful plot lines opened but never satisfied. From a writer's point of view I dislike stories which get to the middle of a scene, then just stop. If the scene is not complete, just keep writing. You write well, so that should be no problem. I want the rest of this story. I want to see these characters grow, discover, enlighten themselves. I want more of your writing, and as another writer, that is a high compliment.