All Comments on 'When Worlds Collide'

Hm, all I can say that Julia is cold as ice.

Nice story and well written. Will Julia become a Lesbian now? Ahh, probably not, she is experimenting.

Nah, hot as fuck.

Do not like her one bit. She’s too stupid for words. She’ll end up seriously hurt, wondering why?

Wish I could give this story a 12!

Another amazing story with a thinking, feeling, human being. People grow and change. Would her relationship have survived if she hadn't gone down the path she did? We'll never know for sure, but it seems she had her doubts. Why else would she be open to her seduction? I love a story that makes me think and has characters that I can understand, and even if I don't like some of them, I understand their motivations. Great story

I thought the dialogue was great.

Building 3 - d characters takes time.

I know you describe yourself as an amateur but I really like your work.

Sex was great and characters had realistic flaws.

I have never experienced a 4some with 2 couples but always felt that all sex should be together in same space.

How about girls in 69 and simultaneously receiving anal from the the males?

Lass Lover

Not sure how I came upon your work, but this piece resonates — yes, erotically intense, but so much more. Your characters, the dialogue while engaged, and where you take them whether they want to follow or not. Quite creative. So, I must read more of how you let sex speak to the storyline. Day late viz. your post date but had to comment.