All Comments on 'Where Angels Do Not Dare'

I think you may have some pretty good ideas here, but the writing makes it hard for me to really get into it. Every job or profession has its own tools. If a mechanic can't use a wrench or a carpenter can't use a saw, that's a problem. The tool of a writer is the language, and if the spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc. are wrong, the result won't be good no matter great the ideas might be. In the meantime, maybe you can get a volunteer editor to help.

Thank you for a nice little story. It has a good feel and flows well - but it needs punctuation! (8-line sentences are far too long). A few spelling mistakes also. Please keep writing.