by Daniellekitten
To write so many different stories at once. I struggle to keep on track with just one story. Not that I'm complaining, more for me to read.
Really liking how this one is shaping up. Looking forward to reading more.
Its a really good story line and plot wouldnt mind if you started it back up
I'm loving this storyline. It's very promising and sooo unique... you've got to continue this... is this going to be one of the hunter series stories? great... but, please, do continue...
Please continue with this story! It's so unique and different from everything else. But I would've loved it if it included romance.
I liked the satirical take on religion. I think you should have taken out the part with Rayne Hunter b/c it seemed strange that she would arrest him for being a good samaritan even if she did want to confirm his identity. And moreso, b/c you put the opening for a story that would continue...having God say that David and her had to know each other b/c he'd help her....but that storyline isn't developed. If you had chosen to go ahead with it I'm sure it would have been awesome. The rest of it I loved. Great story.
This is different from your other stuff but I love it - its quirky and has me hooked. Please continue it...
You have peaked my curiosity with this story of David Stewart and Rayne Hunter.....please finish this story. I seem to keep reading a lot if your stories that need to be finished and I am on the edge waiting for them!!! Thank you for reading my comment.
I'm so intrigued by David, and love all the forms that God takes. May we have another installment? Pretty please?
Danielle you could be ne of the best witers hre if you would only finish you stories.
This is getting so frustrating
Why dont you finish your stories?????
It's just getting good.
I like how each adventure is pretty much complete in itself, but I still want more.