All Comments on 'Where Did She Go Pt. 01'

Thanks, Billyslate..

It turned out as a really loving story, and following the story line in the song "Just give me a reason" by Pink..

You have transformed this into a beautiful story so far, and I can't Waite for the next part.. Tears was also flowing, which I think makes the story even better

Cheers, Billyslate

Belinda Hansen

I enjoyed the premise and the story theme, but it reads very dry, like a documentary and it’s tough to feel a lot of emotion in it.

If Marcie Rae was missing and not returning emails for that long of a period why didn’t she hire a detective? She obviously had the $$ to do so.

Thank you for writing this

Hi Belinda,

I am pleased that you are enjoying PT: 01 of MY/YOUR💐story, and hope you will like PT: 02 just as much!

I am having fun writing it.

Cheers,

Billyslate

I was very happy to again read your story and cannot wait for part 02 and how they become a very happy loving family and Frankie becomes part of the family as a friend and becomes a god-mum to the girls would become a happy time for Frankie this is a brilliant story and always wait for your stories to read only yours is the best as far as I am concerned Billyslate thank you.xxxx