All Comments on 'Where Did That Come From'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This might be the worst thing I have ever seen on this site.not one cohesive thought to be found. Please don't subject us to anyone of this crap. Stop writing now for people who don't need to be washing their eyeballs after letting them see this type of thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Too abrupt of a change. Needed more transistion text.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Drivel.

payenbrantpayenbrantover 2 years ago

....just....no....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not a Captcha remark worth

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's dumb, stupid writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"Basic English Grammar for Dummies". I suggest you invest in this book. It will help you immensely.

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Retired engineer, retired on the coast. My writing background has been technical writing. The works of writers like saddletramp1956 and kalimaxos inspired me to give it a try. I enjoy comments from published authors, in most cases the comments are helpful. Anonymous comments...