All Comments on 'Where Do We Go From Here'

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FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartalmost 2 years ago

4, enjoyable. The problem I had with it was the problem with any story starting in the middle, we don't know the characters from missing a good chunk of their backstory, we didn't see the divorce to know why the MC was so willing to forgive her so easily, to feel sympathy for them and want them back together. Not saying these type of stories are bad, just to me (purely personal opinion) it always feels like reading a 2nd or 3rd chapter of a story.

dnick47dnick47almost 2 years agoAuthor

Advice taken. Thanks for the instructive input.

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I write stories for entertainment. I do my best to dot my 'i's and cross my 't's, but I gave my grammar guide before I retired, so cut me some slack. At 74 there isn't a lot that I use to cherish doing that I am now capable of doing owing to a bad back. So to all of you fru...

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