All Comments on 'Where the Climate's Sultry Pt. 02'

Really brilliant combination of humour and eroticism. 5*

Never has a big schlong been so much fun!

This type of story (the middle-aged man with his harem of beauties) is a staple of Literotica but you have breathed new life into the form with an excellent writing style and a lightness of touch. Not taking oneself too seriously is a quality that is sometimes in short supply among our authors. The sex scenes are handled very well too. Not too explicit, but arousing and lots of fun.

Interesting idea, to pair Julia with Hunter. Love the idea, in fact. I appreciate you don't try to truly make him an "Adonis," although you do make him well-hung, which is a bit of a "cheat," and to be fair, he should have pleasured Julia orally to show his appreciation of her wanting to please him and seduce him in the first place.

If this was edited, you should get a different editor, as Hunter became "Hayden" when Julia ushered him to the hotel room. Some unnecessary repetitions mar the reading flow also.

Competent installment. 4

Hi Com! Yeah, Bruce must have been on the grog when he edited this one. He'll get a flea in his ear and a tinnie out of his sixpack for the shoddy work.