All Comments on 'While Wolf Ch. 01'

Keep up the good work, I am looking forward to reading more...

Donna

I want more pls hurry up with the next chapter

good read so far

When's more due out? I really enjoyed it! DW

When is more going to be posted? That was a tease and I would like to read more :)

Look forward to reading more

Did you mean White Wolf or Wild Wolf?

on your first submission! And what a great first chapter, although it read more like a tease with the promise of more to come. I hope the wait for more is not a long one. Having taken poor Ian Hunter from the sidewalk bleeding.....to becoming a Were and being told you must make it home or face death......

Again Congratulations on your first of hopefully many submissions to Lit. I look forward to following your adventures of Ian Hunter.

That part of a story maid my day thanks .

I hope to be reading more from you soon.

looking forward to reading more

I like you idea, but you should consider getting a editor or reading it out loud after you've finished. Simple mistake can be a real take-away from the story. Other than that I look forward to the next installment. Just a quick question though; Is this going to be a gay werewolf, I'm asking because you didn't specify in the tags. I've got nothing against those kinds of stories, I really enjoy them but it would be helpful to know what to be expecting.

keep it going. make sure to bump it up a knotch each time you add another to this. will be watching for it. great first run.

You've an interesting beginning going here, and I'd love to read more. You said there would be more...but that was back in March. Please don't stop!

A little slow start until the wolf. But there's hope. Waiting for the next chapter.