All Comments on 'While You Were Sleeping'

Should have never married her. Looks like a divorce is in the future.

Let Jimmy catch her fucking him again, and figure out the -year-old is his.

I'm not sure what the point was of putting in the the reader's head that there are consequences of unprotected sex. What a mood killer. I realize there is the hint that their child might be Jimmy's but that does not contribute to the story.

and he mairred her??? bs story...bill

Just how old _is_ li'l Davey?

The beginning was confusing but otherwise good story

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Could anyone really sleep through all that? (If she does it again, I reckon she owes it to Jimmy to wake him up.)

There has to be a sequal. A second night is needed. Mommy needs to realize that Davey was born 9 months after that night and the reason that they have not had anymore rugrats is not luck but that Bob is firing blanks and Jimmy is Davey's daddy.