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All Comments on 'Whispers in the Vineyard Ch. 02'

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 2 years ago

I'm enjoying this series. The characters, the storyline and the variety of well written sex. 5 stars

rml65rml65about 2 years ago

This is a wonderful well written story looking forward to the rest!

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

*****Very entertaining LOVE STORY. I love it!! Please continue this series. Thanks for sharing

HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 2 years ago

I'm loving this very erotic love story. I'm fond of the older woman/younger man storyline. I'm intrigued as to how you intend developing this tale. Perhaps chapter 3 will give me a clue?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your transitions of events are so effortless, and you keep the reader right there with you through the whole chapter 1 and 2, and I am certainly on my way to 3. You tell a large amount of time, but enough detail that it all seems so natural. Again, really great writing. Bravo. JEF

Richard1940Richard1940about 2 years ago

it started good but it's getting better

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Life happened and I will be back to writing soon. In the meantime I just read something I'd like to share. xo A MESSAGE FOR MEN... I get a lot of random messages on here from strange men asking what turns me on. So, I thought I might just put it out there because I think I sp...