All Comments on 'Whispers Through the Vent'

A delightful time. Every willing boy ought to have an Aunt Sarah.

Amazing!

I can't believe that it's your first. You write well, and i detected no obvious errors (or even Not so obvious). Keep writing, You are very good!

Liked the story. A really excellent first story! I was wrong about the cousin relationships too. A good chart in familytreemagazine (dot) com

I enjoyed this story, and it was very cleaver of you using the vent. I look forward to reading more of your stories, I would have liked more of these three, but sadly you concluded the story here, so it would be hard to add chapters to it.

Now that... was a good one! Natural. Unrushed, Sexy and juicy. Warm and delightful. Five pieces of candy!!!

Yesss..!! Great story..!!

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