All Comments on 'White Noise Ch. 01'

by Hypnospects

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise although I wonder if you will ever revisit your older works like 'Establishing Dommenance' or 'More than meets the eye'

ccs29745ccs29745over 1 year ago

Great start to a possible long series. Nice job on this one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, a good start. WHat happens when he shuts down the machine sounds? Does the boss ever discover what happened in her office or does she just sit there without knowing that cum is dripping from her pussy? Does the boss lose her mind as a sex starved bimbo or will she keep her mind together to run her company as she did previously? It would be nice to see just how far he goes with the other women in the company. Will he get them to work in the nude? Will they have to pleasure him from time to time? So many options to explore.

HypnospectsHypnospectsover 1 year agoAuthor

First story in a while, just wanted to get back on the horse with something fun and simple

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctorover 1 year ago

I hope this will become a series. well Done thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't wait for the next chapter.

shysuzyshysuzyover 1 year ago

I love this - can't wait for another chapter

zena99zena99over 1 year ago

Fantastic start to what is hopefully a long and continuing series. I am very jealous of Avery!

RonanJWilkersonRonanJWilkersonabout 1 year ago

brief, but interesting.

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