All Comments on 'White Slave'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

Hot, 5 stars

Forest18cForest18cover 5 years ago
Sorry don't see it as racist

If you only look at Blake and White yes but if you have a brain larger then a flea you see an interracial couple in a Dom/sub marraige. I liked it.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Great. Thanks. Creative shift in the POV

D/s was a nice spice too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
pretty racist

This isn't a BDSM relationship, this is an emphasis on a black man owning a white woman, hence the title.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

When young and on spring break a group of neighborhood girls would go also but not always the same week or place as us . They would always tell us about two of their group would always fuck locals to whatever place they went . She said in both Mexico and JAMAICA they went through a bunch of locals and were sped at least once on each trip. The two girls back home were not promiscuous at all and had good reputations so I was always curious to the truth of the stories. I happen to have been with or around girls we knew that went wild away from home who were completely different when home with the boyfriend. So who knows

OGHMNWOGHMNWover 5 years ago
Interesting and Wonderful

I enjoyed your writing style of the story. I agree that it is a Hot and Erotic story told very well. It’s both Interracial and DOM/sub in context. Thank You!

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 5 years ago
She likes it!

"If I didn't like it, I wouldn't wear it." She likes being a submissive, and the ownership component of her relationship with her husband. She began this journey long before she met her husband. A wonderful story of wife sharing. There's no abuse either mental or physical. She is getting just as much or more enjoyment out of it as the men are. A 5 Star Rating.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
One

One of the absolute worst stories I've ever almost read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One

Has to wonder why 26thNC is in such denial.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ugly story

Wrong category. Nasty, racist material. And the super glued piercing? Give me a pair of end nippers and that piercing will be off in less than 15 seconds.

Horrible.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice twist

I have to admit the reveal that the narrator was also black did take me by surprise and maybe shows some of my own subconscious biases (“One wildly successful Jamaican lad— hah hah, why not? But the best Cambridge pal of a smart ivory English lass is also black— who wouldda thunk”)

It always amazes me that some readers come to Literotica to battle over their parochial proclivities in sexual mores rather than to safely explore erotic alternatives and unrealizable taboo adventures, which seems like what the site is about.

This story is well realized on its own terms and deserves to be rated accordingly— 5*

lwe

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikerover 2 years ago

I loved this short story and the quality of the writing is outstanding. I liked the delayed description of sex with the wife, instead the author jumps to the next day, and then we are given an account of their copulation. Perhaps this story should have been classified as Interracial or BDSM rather than LW? Also, what is the role of the maid? Is she also a slave? 5 stars and added to my favourites.

ehppmsehppmsover 2 years ago

I liked the story and would have liked to read more about their threesome adventure.

lflyer82lflyer82about 2 years ago

Always a surprise twist. I can’t get enough of this author. 5*

lflyer82lflyer82about 2 years ago

Steelring, I used to build models with superglue You could get a vial of liquid that would soften the glue joint to separate parts that were glued together. I used it mostly to get the glue off my hands. Anyway please keep publishing your stories. JR

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Seriously hot coupling and you leave us to imagine the three of them fucking. Lovely way to finish.

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