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Then the two men appeared together again, they both spoke, telling Ray that he would have to start a new life and change his ways! He was told that there was still hope for him if he resolved to lead a decent life. If not, they assured him that his ruin would be certain. He was told that the choice was his; to fly like an eagle or squirm like a worm!
The tape ended but Ray just stared at the blank screen. He had lost every thing that mattered to him; even his once trusted cock would not perform. He figured that it would get better when the ache in his heart subsided. Ray felt so empty and useless, gone was his self-confidence. Tears flowed down his face as he pondered his future.
THE END
- COMMENTS
Anonymous12 months agoReally an 11` inch dick I know a lot of black men none had an 11 inch dick that is from the racist white man's mind! You know I enjoy a story of black man rape but don't tell me that a white woman will fall in love with a rapist, little white boy, that your relitives have never experience a rape because it isn't about sex it is about power over the rape victim, humiliating her making her do thing. please don't try and tell me that the victim will beg t6o be taped again. tell a true story
chloelovesfurover 3 years agoThe newly weds bit got me very turned on. The 2nd part of the story not so much. However read it a few times and really enjoyed it !
Chloe
merrySMalmost 8 years agoIn this very short story you repeated 'big black cock' 7, count them, seven times. We know he has a big black cock, there are several ways to describe it, thick, member, rod, pulsing, throbbing, monster etc. The sex scenes were not detailed and not hot. Character development, instead of 'he fucked her, and she orgasmed', more description; 'the fat tip of his cock split open her thick lips and slipped into...'
Bring the person there.
Definitely an immature state if mind.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThis was a waste of my fucking time. I don't know how or why I ended up reading this story but I wish it t didn't exist. Seriously, this is a fucking pathetic exscuse for a story. You come off as a twelve year old with serious small cock issues and a lack of imagination. Not to memtion your seriously lacking story writing skills and attention to detail. Next time go fuck a blow up doll and keep this shit in your head.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThis wasn't a story - just a 13-yr-old's rape fantasy. Pointless, stupid and boring - a complete waste of time.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agomy pretty wife wanted to waite&have sex after we were married.i am glad she did it was one hell of a surprise..we were really happy on our wedding night.we got ready on our first night.i took off my clothes&was in bed.my new wife was in the bathroom taking her clothes off laughing.she laughed & came next to the bed.the surprise was there.she was a hermorphdite.she had a cunt&she had a 8 inch dick.it was hard as a piece of steel.she smiled&said I am not gay nature has made me enjoy both ways anytime with men or women.she jumped in bed she put my dick into her cunt.she pumped her ass like crazy.that piece of steel slamming aganst my belly.she was yelling&screaming &cumming all over my belly from her cunt&that piece of throbbing piece of steel.after we finished we were talking.she said she was going to screw the hell out of my mom&sister&also my dad.she said with a big smile I am screwing the whole family I am not gay I am doing what nature wanted me to do.she said we are going to have a happy life.lets do it again I am ramming it up your ass you married a wonder of nature&i love you
Anonymousabout 12 years agoNo plot, no character build-up, no logic. Does he work at the hotel, how did he get the daughter's key, why does he do it, why did the wife leave, and how did the white guy seduce her? Questions just lead to more unanswered questions.
The whole story is black guy with a big dick, forces white women to fuck him and he ruins them. Black Power! Whoo! Really that is all you got? You write and spell correctly - thank you, but that is not writing. That is a poorly conceived wet dream. The string of logic to make ALL that happen is so impossible that it pulls you right out of the story. This could have been a really interesting story with the possible things that happen. Stormbringer writes the same kind of Black men destroy white pussies, but at least there is a story, a logic, a reason, character.
Next time take a little more time with those things and the story might fly.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis story was just OK. I, too, approve of the comeuppance angle, but the ending seemed hurried and a bit uncertain. I agree with the reader who suggested that revenge against Ray himself, rather than his relatives, would have worked out better as a conclusion. I do hope you will keep on writing.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI am a large Black man who has been fucking white women since I was fourteen. I personally know two black acquaintances who have suffered a large dose of Reality for mistreating their white girl conquests. One guy got his ass shot up by an irate husband who wife he had beaten once too often.
The other guy was charged with rape and assault when he went too far in humiliating his white wife girlfriend. She got back at him big time - he's doing big time.
I have always treated my white women with respect although I dominate them as a matter of course. They love the big cock, the extraordinary fuck sessions and even their submissive nature adds to their thrills. For example, I insist they whip out my dick and suck it as we drive around town and SUV drivers, truck drivers and toll booth attendants eyes pop out as they spot a good looking blonde inhaling my big, black dick. See, i told ya - I always treat them right!
