All Comments on 'Who is the Real Alex? Ch. 03'

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MissedLifeMissedLifealmost 6 years ago

Good story. Hope the chapters keeping coming sooner so we can see if Mia can remain hidden.

HobomonarchyHobomonarchyalmost 6 years ago
Great stuff so far. Good structure and word choice. but your kinda losing me with Alex

I mean the guy is a completely irredeemable asshole now. In chapter 1 and 2 it could have just been threats but this cements it that he is a psychopathic. It's rich that he "loves her in his own way" that way being as a object to keep around the house. The only way this can end well for me now is if she leaves him for good.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 6 years ago
Loving it

I wonder when she will throw it back in his face that he’s gone to a lot of trouble to capture an expendable whore, obviously because she bruised his ego when she ran.

Be nice to see her stand up to him and not get broken.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

he is selfish he called het a street whore with no value he didnt even repent that and now he wants to break her spirit her soul

and want to replace it with a sexbot . well all the men are like that anyway they love bitches but settle for nice girls to ruin them to cheap sluts and throw them once bored reality sucks

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