All Comments on 'Who Played Who? (A Prison Story)'

by ChannelingBillySantoro

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm willing to bet that you will be ignoring your future traffic tickets from now on!

GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86over 1 year ago

The flow of your story was a little fast paced and giving away that the bottom wanted it before the end really took something away from the whole reluctance aspect. Additionally more than once saying 'we'll get to that later' or som variation of was just annoying. But a decent story overall.

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Back a few decades ago, a man was born. Literally a man. I came out of my mom’s vagina already 32 years of age with my high school diploma and two phDs in hand. Doctors were baffled when I began immediately inventing the world’s first car engine that runs solely on potato s...