All Comments on 'Who Wins?'

Loved this one. Pt 2 perhaps? X

A great story with a lovely finish. Please continue with more chapters.

I was wondering how this stranger was no nice to an obviously overhung guy. Last paragraph laid oit all out. Good wife. Two winners. Look forward to a continuation.

Thanks for sharing. I will be on watch for your future submissions.

That was super cute, hot, and romantic. You did such a wonderful job with your descriptions, I felt the warmth of the beach. Five stars.

That's an impressive plot twist, keep up the good work.

Great little story, well written, with a fun twist. Great job!