All Comments on 'Who You Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Mixed feelings

I guess it's good that they got together in the end but he's a beta letting her do all those things to him and she's a hoe, happy ending but leaves a tainted feeling in my head

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I give this a 3. The sex scene was good but the MC is a natural doormat, and thats cool I guess. Some people are comfortable in that role and never move out of that so called comfort zone. The reality of life is that most time people like Rob gets shit on and there is no happy ending for them unless they move out of there comfort zone and make that happiness for themselves. P.S. that chick was a bit of a slut IJS.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love this story!

Whoever wrote this is a totally wonderful sweet loving person and I would absolutely be so delighted to be in her presence. I so very much wish there were more thoughtful passionate loving girls like this author in this world! Viva latinas!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

dont know what everyone else was expecting, its literally labelled femdom, you don't get to be pissed off about the character being submissive if it's written for guys into submission lol

as a bi femdom, there's plenty in this story to like, just some weird tense changes here and there.

FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartabout 3 years ago

Not bad. Most stories like this involve a pretty psychotic chick who treats the guy like complete garbage, while the bully in this was definitely not nice starting out but showed real love towards the end. I'm always a sucker for happy endings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

this shit was over after the toilette booth stunt

and don´t emberass yourselves by using dom sub as a reason / excuse it (the dynamic of such relations) does not work this way

what the bitches did there was Sexual harassment (and I have counted three more violations of the law) and no amount of honey is making this right, there where litterally dozens of ways the author could have handelt this better and still get the desired outcome. Right now they are sexuall offenders simple as that

this sullies the story beyond salvation 1*

TheOneBelowAllTheOneBelowAllover 2 years agoAuthor

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Unfortunately I’m male identifying but I wish I knew a woman like in this story as well. I’m so glad you enjoyed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There's nothing gentle about this, it's just straight femdom, so please tag better. Decent for what it is, misleading tag aside.

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I’m a young man with an unhealthy obsession with the supernatural. I also like my women dangerous for some reason. Especially since I’m not a dangerous person.