by Lucifer_morningstar2013
Nice story! If you write a second part about next round of tournament, can you please include one unkempt girl, which is all hairy and stinky - let's say barbarian or so, She never washes and very dirty, so the stink helped her to win couple of rounds but then she was shaved and cleaned by force, losing her advantage.
I think the premise of the story is interesting, but the writing is quite weak. It doesn't engage the reader or evoke vivid scenes. I lost interest pretty early as a result. Sorry =/