All Comments on 'Why Him?'

Whatever works!

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I give it a 4 star....too many issues with the purposefully hurting of a spouse. Even if it was supposed to be a warning....

Unless the wife tried her best to get her hubby to do better this could've and most likely would of def backfired in real life

Cute story but the wife should have tried something different. In my world this would have caused a divorce. 3.2 stars.

What if he had gone straight at the asshole and fucked him up? Jail time! Such a bad idea. D

While I might not agree with the way the tale was told. Who cares. It is your tale and it fit the way you wanted. My only duty is to consume it and give you feed back.

I did just that. In doing that I had to give it an Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating. Now as for why I enjoyed your tale just the way your produced it. Your tale took a long agreed to journey of a spouse finding out that their beloved has cheated on them. Bla Bla Bla.

But in your production of the tale, you gave the full impression that it was real and built on the emotions that everyone could potentially feel to move the tale in one direction. Good move on your part. The image created was just awesome and realistic.

Then you completely break the mold by having the perceived offended party needing to rush home to console the perceived offender for some reason. Breaking this mold was a stroke of awesomeness.

But to me the reason it went from an Excellent Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐ to an Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating was the fact that the 2 hated parties became sort of friends.

I am looking forward to your next production for our consumption. Thank you for this one.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

If John can overlay the face of the woman in the video he could have easily removed a tattoo. Likely Rick's wife cucked him and he was too stupid to figure it out, and then out of guilt treated he like a queen. Hope Rick was on his toes when John came for dinner and didn't drink anything he didn't pour himself.

WTF? The idiot hates a guy, then thanks him? If it’s that contentious, you just move on and ignores him.

If he is that good of a video maker, maybe he erased Mandy's butterfly tattoo. John and Mandy might have done the dirty deed and the videos were real. This is on shaky legs.

That calls for disaster

or not.......

Uuuuhhhh nah

He should have divorced Mandy anyway for letting him think she had an affair with his enemy.

The ending is disgusting, never thank your enemy for anything and definitely don’t let him fuck your wife.

If he had at least punched Mandy in response to her saying “I promise I’ll do better”. It would be worth 2 stars. Best part of this is that it was only 750 words.

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Wtf?

I love it when something original pops up. Great job in 750 words.

What a lot of nonsense! Thank goodness it was only 750 words.

Jesus, just no.

Interesting and different. 5 for doing that.

Wow that's an interesting twist. The wife actually loves the husband. They work on their marriage rather than abandon it. The two men get along at the end. How did I switch timelines, I left the oven on in the normal one?

Nice job fitting it into 750 words, it didn't feel hollowed out or missing details.

Absolutely fucking stupid.

Great little short story. Thanks for writing.

Not bad. Three stars.

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Dangerous game.

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Obviously John wife would not be happy about being the star of deception porn. How wise is putting the video in the hands of an enemy?

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Would Mandy get her "husband back" if Rick went directly over to John's house with his 45 and put a few holes in him?

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Fake divorce papers would be safer.

His wife is a manipulative bitch, playing with his head and his heart. He needs to change -- from "married" to "single."

So she looks exactly like his wife minus the tattoo? So what is stopping her from covering the tattoo or having the videographer do some edit magic to cover that tattoo?

I think this would have ended my marriage as there would be so much doubt and even anger from her doing it that real or not my attitude would be so bad for so long she would dump me within 6 months to a year. I mean sex would be off the table. Even any intimacy like kissing would be gone.

THAT was very different! And for a 750 effort, surprisingly complete. Nice job!

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4 ****

Good story, but pranks like this often backfire in real life.That she pulled this with soneone her husband hated makes it more problematic.Like I said a good story but in reality I and I think most other men would be enraged by a trick like this.Very difficult to come back from.And, oh yes, the filmmakers wife would definately learn of it.

Piss poor. Working long hours then spending any other time in bars, this guy didn't want to be married anyway. As someone mentioned, if he could seamlessly overlay a face, it would be no problem at all to remove a tattoo. If this guy really hated John as much as he says, the fact Mandy conspired with him might in itself might be cause for divorce.

Time for a lawyer. This wife is batshit crazy.

Nope

Different, but it didn't make much sense to me. A dangerous way to make a point, and I thought the message from wife to husband could have been made much more easily, with less risk. That said, thank you for this story! I appreciated it!

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Be well!

So the fucker's wife looks just like the MC's wife, absent the butterfly tattoo? And the fucker is a professional videographer? Uh, you apparently don't know that videos can be touched up? Like removing pimples and blemishes from a person's body? Or a tattoo?

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If the MC is that stupid, and has been that neglectful of his wife, then he deserves whatever shit comes his way.

ummmmm... Im okay with buying her the car (maybe it was implied with the description of the muffler sound) but why in the fuck go to the guys house and for Gods sake why would that bitch of a wife go to the guy he hates the most and have him forge a video. She could have easily paid someone else to do it. I would have bounced her ass out the door and then kicked ol Johnny boy in his nuts.

Good story. Characters are believable, and their actions plausible. You have opened the door for follow-up stories. Thanks for good read.

I liked it. Foolish stunt, but growth all around.

Risky business. He needed a wake up call, but going to his mortal enemy for such a favor could have gone very badly for them. Glad it worked out in 750 words, not easy to do. Nice job.

That was silly. If he can fuck his wife and change her face, he can fuck MC's wife and remove her tattoo.

You used your sparing number of words in any way but sparingly. If this was an automobile, you got like 500-mpg. Brevity is th... you know!

Different view at a story. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for your writing.

For a 750 Word story, Five Stars.

JPB

Go to a guy the husband hated to send hi. a wakeup Call? Normally that would have blown up in her face right there.

Huh? Three stars ⭐️ for this one.

Pretty good little story, but this playing pranks stuff is lame.

Stupid to say the least.

What ever happened to talking?

Bill S.

Clearly I needed to change my marriage so I converted my assets to gold and disappeared to Wyoming