All Comments on 'Wicked Mother Ch. 04'

It was entertaining , if not comprehensible. Good clean dirty fun in mode of Nero and Caligula.

Full marks *****

Thanks for giving us an end to you story. I really enjoyed all four parts.

This could have had so much more in it.

I mean I like what you did, but there was huge potential for more.

Not criticism at all.

Just wanting something with more meat in it.

I await your next piece of work.

The ending was too abrupt and left it feeling rushed to finish. You had enough room to go on about their relationship and lives.

I enjoyed the part about the MN pond. It does get mighty chilly in the winter.

Very good ending. Keep up the good writing! 5 stars!

Very nice story but you should have wrote one more chapter with his new life with Carrie and his mother 5 stars!!!