All Comments on 'Wife and Ex-Wife Ch. 07'

Over 22,000 views on the first chapter. Less than 2500 on chapter 6. That should tell you everything you need to know about how your story is being received. Wrap it up and try again. This is simply not worth the time spent to read it.

2 stars

and about as desirable and useful.

Thanks!

Well, I can tell why the first marriage failed. For the same reason the second marriage is going to fail. Terminal stupidity. I'm sure the author will try to make it seem so natural and exciting and inevitable, but Patrick and Amelia are two lazy dumb shits. They got divorced because "we just weren't well suited for each other. Temperamentally speaking, that is. I'm sorry to say it, but she's a somewhat needy person, and I think she felt I wasn't paying enough attention to her." So of course, the solution to fixing an otherwise good marriage of two good people is to, stop being married!

Sorry, but Nina should be packed and moved out before Patrick and Amelia wake up in the morning and start fucking. If she lets herself get sucked into a life with these two airheads she will deserve all the grief they will share with her from their fucked up lives.

Reading some of the comments, and they are overly harsh. Some things could be cleaned up, but the story is setup to be taken many different directions. And you are leading the user along by degrees instead of falling into the trap of going straight to fucking. Good job