All Comments on 'Wife and the Deacon'

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BigGreg8xBigGreg8xover 2 years ago

This is not cuckold its REVENGE!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not much point to this.

KalimaxosKalimaxosover 2 years ago
Hmmm...

You sure you didn't click group sex by mistake? The Loving wives Taliban would love this kind of story.

txskipper597txskipper597over 2 years ago

I try not to give sub par reviews, but this?? I will just not vote

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved the revenge part for the Veteran. Too many vets goes through this and does nothing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dubious. Really? The "black ops" thing..."yeah I sanctioned some"... Not even imaginative. If a operator talks publicly chances are they weren't ANY type of special Ops.. This story doesn't even deserve a negative star rating.

desecrationdesecrationover 2 years ago

"No, but he treated me like a slut. That's what I like." Time to interview her uncle; these are the words of an abused person. This story just made me sad, but I can't claim that's from a lack of artful albeit straightforward construction.

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Retired engineer, retired on the coast. My writing background has been technical writing. The works of writers like saddletramp1956 and kalimaxos inspired me to give it a try. I enjoy comments from published authors, in most cases the comments are helpful. Anonymous comments...

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