Wife Dances in Rain Song

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Alright let me try and explain this!!

I & my wife are married for little over 3 years; My wife started working as an HR manager for Telecom company.

She has the perfect figure and a dream girl friend for any one. Recently she took part in a dance competition; she is dancing with one of her Ex-boy friend; whom she dumped 2 months prior to our marriage. At 27, she has flat tummy & curves at the right places.

She has been working since the last 3 years and trust me she gets more roses on valentine's day than many other girls in the same town. Known to dress well, she is hot.

So coming to the day of the show, all was set. She took my permission for this act and was in the 3rd round of the dance competition. I was all ok with the events.

Finally the evening came; I am sitting among the front rows in the audience all excited to see the dance performance of the love of my life. Ready to welcome her with the loudest cheer I can muster the moment she makes her appearance. I couldn't wait. I will make sure she hears my cheers. Her eyes will meet mine. I will blow her a kiss. And she will smile widely pleased by my support.

She was proud to have such a cool and open minded guy for a husband. I smile to myself pleased by the thought and impatiently waited for the curtains to go up.

And finally it happens. The curtains lift. Cheers and applause break out from all around the crowd, from everyone except me.

One look at her and my heart stopped.

She looked gorgeous. I wasn't pleased. Not one bit. Not even close.

She looked smoking hot as whistles started from the audience.

My forward thinking brain slowly starts to think all the wrong things. My hot wife is up in the stage with a strong handsome muscular ex boy friend in a snugly fitting white shirt which was unbuttoned on top exposing his well defined chest.

And she was standing a little to his left with her back to the stage in a red saree, which was infact a sorry excuse for a saree. The only evidence of the skimpy red blouse she wore was the thin red string that went across her back leaving everything else on her back waist up in the open. Pretty sure it could pass for a bikini.

Song starts playing; Water starts pouring from showers above the stage making them wet. And they start their dance performance which starts off with her partner running his hands sensually over her bare back. And she starts seductively moving her hips to his touch. Later she carelessly runs her silver color long nails through his chest & pulls his shirt. Now he the guy is shirtless; later she pulls his hair and pushes his head on to her cleavage. She now runs her hands over his bare waxed & fit chest.

I pat my scorching heart over my chest muttering over and over "Oh God" while the whole crowd erupted around me in wolf-whistles and cheers.

Her soaking wet saree clung to her body. Her expression orgasmic as his hands glided over her navel, toned tummy & bare hips.

It's just a performance. It's just an act. Don't worry, I thought to my self.

They dance around passionately, their wet bodies teasing and caressing each other. Each touched a punch on my heart.

You agreed to this. She did ask your permission. Now don't be an ass and sit back and be supportive. You are an open-minded man. You are absolutely cool with this.

Did he just kiss her? Oh she is in his arms. Get your filthy hands off her navel , I muttered!

Her deep navel played peek -a-boo behind her wet saree with every swing of her hips. A sight which I was pretty sure every set of male eyes in the hall was feasting on. Many had their phones out trying to capture the sizzling hot performance on the stage. One guy shouted "lucky guy who gets to touch this hot lady!"

They come close to each other as he starts to kiss her neck & navel mercilessly; her hands run around his bare back & well defined chest as she pushes him on the chair & sits on him & seduces him by running her fingers from his lips to his flat stomach.

Both stand up, get come close & dance with passion!

He then pulls her & both kiss passionately as the performance is done; the judges gave them a 10/10 & applauded them for their brave performance.

The stage erupted in thunderous applause and cheers. My heart erupted along with it and splintered into a thousand pieces.

But I am Open man!!

I went home thinking what they both must have done in the rehearsals and after the show.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

I see no point in a half story of weak husband banter and well no entertainment value 2/5.

Just_WordsJust_Words3 days ago

Two months before the marriage?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Don't give up your day job.

leorusleorusabout 3 years ago

You wrote this story inspired by a post you saw in quora didn't you?

I must say. Good Job. I loved reading it.

By the way I am the one who wrote that post. I almost forgot about it until I came across this story today and it striked me soo familiar.

premshankerpremshankeralmost 4 years ago

He is a "open man"

now open your "fly" and 'shag'

What a shame !!!

premshankerpremshankerover 4 years ago
wimp

Ass of an Husband , knowing fully well allowed wife for every thing , now shedding crocodile treas.

What a fuck

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
good plot

Writing is average, but Plot is good!! I guess wife wants to enjoy both ends! Wet saree-wow

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Alright let me try and explain this!! I & my wife are married for little over 3 years; My wife started working as an HR manager for Telecom company.

I got as far as the above, knew it would be unreadable. If English is your first language, you need to go back to school. If it isn't you need to find an English editor to help you translate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I'm thinking English isn't your first language?

Because the writing here is sub-standard. SO many mistakes ruined any chance of this being a decent read. He's "Open Man"? What's that? Some new super hero cuckold? Poorly thought out drivel.

1 star

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 4 years ago

You had a great idea, but you quit as soon as you started. Tell us what you see as happening in a case like this and I'll bet you pull in some pretty good scores and comments. As it is, this isn't enough of a story to score. cd

KingBandorKingBandorover 4 years ago

Far better to keep her chained to your bed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You married her two months after she supposedly stopped fucking this guy?

So during that two months you courted, got to know each other, determined you were life partners, proposed, planned, and married. In eight weeks. At 9 weeks previous to the marriage he was fucking her brains out.

You married an aardvark. Next time take a closer look. Whatever happens between them you deserve.

Ahhh, isn't the humiliation and disrespect delicious??? You poor fucked up loser. Just keep making love to your keyboard, something you can relate to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Look it this way!

I am not an Anonymous hater, but I HATE whet Cuck Shit pollutes Loving Wife section. It should be in Trans section because that is what they are.

Now... I know that you didn't state it openly, but you are drifting towards it.

SO... welcome to bunch of mentally ill morons, we got plenty of them here!

PS: if you don't think that I am correct about my observation, post part 2 that will either clear this mess up, or cemented it down?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Needs Developing

The story needs developing. This development could come about by the use of dialogue. Maybe you are leery of using dialogue because English doesn't seem to be your native language.

What makes a story interesting is conflict and then resolutio of the conflict. What conversations between husband and wife finally led to the husband giving her permission to rehearse and then dance with an ex-boyfriend? The husband must have already been emotionally conflicted about this situation. His desire to be a 'nice guy' seemed like a resolution, but it turned out to be a false resolution, since now he is more deeply troubled by what he has seen. Perhaps ground rules had been agreed upon between husband and wife which forbade her kissing her partner. Now that the husband has seen her kissing him, what will he do about that?

Your story is not so much a story yet, but more like a brief sketch or outline of an idea for a story..

HikingThruHikingThruover 4 years ago
is she really married? or just an attached slut?

"she is dancing with one of her Ex-boy friend; whom she dumped 2 months prior to our marriage. At 27, she has flat tummy & curves at the right places.

She has been working since the last 3 years and trust me she gets more roses on valentine's day than many other girls in the same town..."

Supposedly married as long as she's been working, receiving flowers from anyone and everyone, and broke up with ex two months before marrying?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice try in english

Thank you for writing. So it was quick, short, and a light topic. The husband is jealous and now has his mind wandering around thinking more had gone into rehearsals than he had originally believed. All based on his seeing them kiss "passionately" at the end. I agree a passionate kiss is not appropriate but it could be his reading into it more than he should.

But if you don't want her dressed sexy you should have said so before you agreed to the dance. You never explained why she entered the contest? Had they been a dance team prior to her breakup?

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