by amandrake
Good short story.
Please write more chapters to your fabulous series: Rachel Takes Charge
Like the concept, good story, would like to see a longer (more that the 750 word limit) and more detailed version.
Hot story. I agree with the other comments that call for a longer version with more detail.
Great story, would love to read more of this, an expanded version or another chapter.
Good story.
Ignore the comment of ‘Anonymous’ about the story being too short; they’ve clearly missed the point of the “750 Word Project”.
Great use of the 750 word limit, would like to see a more expanded version of this story.
I liked the concept but it was too short and lacking detail, which is probably how the two ladies would describe your cock.
Taking their private life public and bringing others into the play without asking should end the FLR immediately. Dead stop.