All Comments on 'Wife Meets Local Dom'

I enjoyed this, as far as it went, which wasn't very far. The idea was good but the characters and the story-line were hurried and unfinished. You really should take this theme and work a more compelling story around it, possibly with the help of one of the volunteer editors here.

Above all, keep writing! Thank you for posting and keep writing! By the way, keep writing!!

Huge turn-on. Short, commanding guys, like Jim are perfect for willing couples. You made him so wonderfully nasty.

More please, I wish I was humiliated like that.

That is sooo sexy.