All Comments on 'Wife Pregnant? Use Twink Instead'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

good story idea. should have done the guy at the gym. he needs money, and sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please write more; I've read all your stories, great writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I think he should take the guy at the gym up on his offer. I was hoping he was going to suck Chad's cock at the end.

kwameselinskykwameselinskyover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm thinking about taking my show on the road with a Patreon or something...teaming up with a graphic artist to illustrate some of the scenes. Thoughts?

kwameselinskykwameselinskyover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm thinking of taking my show on the road with a patreon or similar...and adding visual depictions of some of the scenes. Thoughts?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

He should start taking on lots of male clients at the gym. Eventually, it starts to change him and turns him gay as well

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the story. First time ever commenting came a lot. Next time. Have him fuck or get fucked by the older guy since he needed the money

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love a good story of an ass being filled with cum! I also like hearing of a throat being filled!I have had both done to me ! Man that is some hot stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Any more continuation? Hope you take this further in this platform.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Any more continuation? Hope you take this further in this platform.

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 2 years ago

Got me very hard, especially at the point he inseminated Chad while holding his neck which heightens the experience. No wonder Chad shot hands free while having his prostate mashed, clenching his shute to bring Blake off. My balls need a follow up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like them two together. I would love more of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hope there is a part 3, want to see where it goes with the old guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hope you're goona post some more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love this POV.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great writing. Definitely need to explore the sex for $ angle.

He should at some point have a second gay guy in the mix. A threesome.

Plus he needs to get it in the ass and see how it feels.

Keep going !

papabear536papabear536almost 2 years ago

I want them to become addicted to each other mmmmmmmmmmm

ConciousLeighConciousLeighover 1 year ago

This was absolutely amazing! The only thing I would add is a deep, mad & passionate kiss when he flipped him over! Great writing, dude!

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