All Comments on 'Wife Sent Me to be Obedient'

Luckily I read your biography before writing this comment. So you are aware of the verb tense, 2nd and 3rd person, spelling, etc, errors and are fine with it. The story is pretty damn hot and I enjoyed it but honestly the fractured English makes it hard to read. Loved the content, the presentation? Not so much.

I found the story rather repetitious. Oral and anal, over and over again. Better descriptions of the situations would have helped. I couldn't figure out what was with the fucking machine and a cock both working at the head at the same time. As an author on Literotica also, I appreciate the effort it takes to write a story. But, when you are writing, think from the reader's viewpoint as to whether he will make sense out of your words.

Keep on writing, though. You'll figure it out!

some people are so DUMB they make other people more DUMB.....