by Cuckadoodle
Love it how some E or molly and plenty of alcohol bfi G’s out usually prim and proper shy wives into becoming cock and cum crazed sluts
I just wish I could have had my wife do this. We talked about it a lot, especially a black guy, and she squirted for the first time. We never did, but talking dirty, she would get so wet and beg me to tell her what I wanted men to do to her.
You should write a part two with her and another wife fucking them all while sober. Nice story.
When the character speaking changes, start a new paragraph.
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Just at a quick glance, the one that stars with
She was now enjoying this ...
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is really at least 6. This is NOT something that can be excused with "Oh, I'm not a professional writer." Anyone who has passed elementary school English should know this.
I agree with the last post. Let her think about it for a week and reschedule a follow up.