All Comments on 'Wifely Support'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
1*

1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Boy was that dumb.

I'm sorry, but this whole thing was just silly. Nothing erotic, interesting or entertaining. Idiotic characters acting without rhyme or reason. UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow

You are a horney little devil arn't you, can't write for shit but oh well. Don't give up your job at mc Donalds, stupid story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Way too long

2 or more stories wrapped into 1. And, the prologue is at the beginning of a story, not the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Right, Life is one big f__k fest!

They should all become therapists. Or maybe they should all seek therapy. Your choice of plot, of course. But kind of lame.

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 9 years ago
To Be Honest

Keep this stuff to yourself. It is not very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
it was great

i enjoyed this very much....thank you for the great read..........

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Stick to making Frosted Flakes. They're grrreat, but your writing isn't.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

sorry but I have to agree:

"To Be Honest

Keep this stuff to yourself. It is not very good."

by Twentyseven

it is spot on

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