by tony_tiger
I'm sorry, but this whole thing was just silly. Nothing erotic, interesting or entertaining. Idiotic characters acting without rhyme or reason. UGH!
You are a horney little devil arn't you, can't write for shit but oh well. Don't give up your job at mc Donalds, stupid story.
2 or more stories wrapped into 1. And, the prologue is at the beginning of a story, not the end.
They should all become therapists. Or maybe they should all seek therapy. Your choice of plot, of course. But kind of lame.
i enjoyed this very much....thank you for the great read..........
sorry but I have to agree:
"To Be Honest
Keep this stuff to yourself. It is not very good."
by Twentyseven
it is spot on