All Comments on 'Wife's Body Betrayal Ch. 01'

The story is too forced, there's a lot of action that could happen and Kelly's emotional state wasn't even explored. Redo the story and fill in the blanks before you go on to chapter 2.

The dude should just get over with it and come out, so she can marry someone that actually gives her what she needs, instead of just being a foil for his own interest in other men.

WOW!!! Loved it. Your wife is a fun little slut... Looking forward to the next part

Not a bad story but the writing was terrible. Try proof reading before posting.

Lousy editing on the spelling.

Bruh

Well, are we going to get another chapter or two? Will Brian and Jim turn her into a willing slut. Maybe they will arrange a gangbang with a black frat or turn her over to a homeless camp? So many options to explore.