by Ijustmight71
I want you to re-write YOUR Way "ANNA SUCCUMBS TO NEIGHBOUR'S COCK" by EVERYONESAVOYEUR - YOU'RE SO DAMNED GOOD, MAN !!! and I've read a 1000 good ones here on Literotica
Very HOT and believable!
A part two would be nice, so that Kim has a new DADDY!
HOT and need more.... would love to see him with kim again and some of her other friends, DADDY needs to spread his seed
Loved the way this was written, really shows how hot a one shot taboo fuck can be. 5 stars!
Cheating Asshole and a friend that's mostly just a skank and betrays the woman that's trying to help her. They get the inevitable conclusion of this, even if a misguided author tries to pretend it'll work out just fine with no real consequences.
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DanDraper, 9 months ago
Incredibly hot story. I enjoyed every moment of this one.
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Every few strokes I'll keep it pressed into her pussy almost as hard as I can while i grind around in circles. Then let up and fuck her wet pussy a few more strokes before bottoming out and grinding in circles again.
"Your cock feels good," Kim whispers seductively into my ear.
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This is a five star story:
5.0 = 100% = A+ (☆☆☆☆☆)!
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... Kim caught me looking at her again. In an attempt to cover my actions, I asked her if she'd found anything for us to watch yet.
"Looks like you have," she replies low enough that I know it was meant for only me to hear.
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KIM is a KEEPER. End of story. Period.
Fucking hot! Looking at a previous comment, I guess someone cannot appreciate a hot cheating fantasy. Thanks for posting and keep up the great work! AH
Long winded narrative, nothing unusual, just more stupid Behavior I guess. Need an editor, some really basic mistakes there.
A very good read! Ignore any and all critics wanting to re-write it, they are entitled to their own opinions. Proof read the next one, have someone edit what you might already think if perfect, consider making the editors comments, then post it!!! Thanks, and take great care.