All Comments on 'Wife's New Trainer (Tribute story)'

unreadable story so dumb

Of course it's dumb..what do expect from an author who is obviously mentally challenged!

A pain in the butt!

3

What a load of crap give up writing!!!

WTF is this and why would anybody put up with it?

Does anybody here have any active neurons?

Please do not write another story.

The best thing for them would be a massive cardiac arrest. Then they can load her disgusting obese body into an old crate and dumped in the landfill with the other garbage.

Well, there went 5 minutes of my life I'll never get back. WTF did I just read?

Stupid

OH MY! I HAVE TO CONFESS I MADE A HUGE MISTAKE...

I STARTED READING THIS STORY! I QUIT VERY EARLY ON WHEN SHE TALKED ABOUT HER BIG ASS AND GOAL OF 690 LBS! 690 LBS!!!! THE SECOND PART OF THIS HORRIBLE MISTAKE IS THAT IT'S NEAR LUNCH TIME AND I LOST MY APPETITE.

What an absolutely stupid story and a complete waste of time. This is certainly one to miss.

I can't believe I wasted 52 seconds reading this drivel. 1 * only because I can't give it a minus number.

Just another story about how women only thinks of them self.

What a rotten woman

As a writer, you are riduculous. I would like to give this a negative 20*, maybe a negative 40* if I had finished it.

Yes, somewhere there must be a nest from which the idiots keep slipping. This author and his story prove it!

Nakedcraving serving us another worthless literary growler.

Please throw away anything you can use to post more stories.

Great story bro but a little bit short. keep it the good work.

hopeless

What was that? Apart from ramblings of an insane writer. You are seriously fucked up. Make an appointment with a shrink and find out why this BS is your fantasy or reality.

JPJ, you wasted too much time that you could have used on writing a decent story. Tags took 10 seconds to read twice.

I can't believe other people actually read this story, I could tell it was trash just by skimming the first few sentences. You should join BlackRandi's clique and write cuckold stories full-time. She'll edit it for you and then have the other members of her cuckolding klatch log in and complement your story, no matter how stomach-turning it turns out to be. She does the same thing for Cagi-gurl and his stories are major cuck crap, so you have nothing to worry about.

This was a Tribute story to what - how bad horse shit smells!

A coward for a husband; and a Cluts for a wife; and a definitely user for a coach. What a pile of shit.

Garbage, but some will fawn over it, like stink on shit. 1*

One can only hope this author never submits any other trash like this.

This "story" is total excrement

good sequel, cant wait for more

Unf, fuck yeah that's hot. More please!

hope you made another part

You gotta make a sequel to this. It was good.