All Comments on 'Wife's Niece Kalie Pt. 01'

Sorry for the bad ratting I enjoyed the story, but hit the wrong ratting by mistake

Spellcheck is free you semi literate moron

Could really use some proofreading. The story shows some promise but hard to follow because of errors. Lack of punctuation is also a problem.

Look those idiots don't count. The story is great I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing I want to know what happens to you & Kalie.

NO MORE!

This "writing" is truly awful: "I would have to great Kalie..." Or, "...the doorbell rang and I answered the door, when the door opened I was amazed to see a well dressed young woman standing at the door. " What, you could only get 'door' into the one sentence FOUR times?

Please, don't write any more of this. Actually, until you learn how, don't write any more of anything.