by NaughtyIntentions
His wife being the object of the young girls desire was confessed and then acted upon by both Bethany and Kathleen and then later with Liz In a Lezzy threesome , after being confronted by Bethany and Kathleen ! On top of all that they still have threesomes very frequently ! And he’s not invited !!!
Either tell the story or don’t bother. Dragging it out doesn’t improve it
All this, to say NOTHING! Looks like this will take 30 more chapters before any actual story comes out.
Too slow to even be a story. Obviously she fucked somebody to get even but I'm not reading 20 chapters of this crap to get the entire story.
Sorry, this, while decently written is really not a worthwhile read. I get you tried to think out of the box, and its appreciated but this is just too dumb to get any better. This went nowhere, sure it made it a couple feet forward, but then sat there and spun its wheels.
I ne er would have suspected that Bethany had feelings… for her dog. But I guess with total immunity, it would have been ok for that confession to come out. I just never saw where she actually said that, but as this is a dog of s story, I guess it’s to be expected.
I’m curious, just how do breasts get married? That’s the second time you’ve told how her breast were married so I’m guessing you must mean it.
Thought this might get better, gave part 1 a 2, and this is no better.
Well, this is just the same as "Stage 02". Why? Stage 01 was as "Wifey tested". Sorry, I don't know why the duplication of the stories. Kinda short in all cases. What is this stuff Mike feeds to Kathleen? We have no back story. What does Kathleen reveal?
So Bethany confesses that she has a thing for Kathleen and they get it on, kissing and licking each other to multiple big I'd. Next?
I am in full agreement with this statement
I will not be reading any more
Just stupid and juvenile. Try again when you mature. Thanks for the effort.
Nice tease. We wonder where this is going. Stay tuned as our devious hubby and his (apparently) oblivious wife explore the inner workings of . . .
So many words to say absolutely nothing. Could have been interesting to where this could lead but it leads nowhere.
Too much repetition. The buildup looks like it will lead to the obvious or be highly contrived. The confession reveal should be in this one.
...... good storyline as well as good writing but I'm tired of being jerked around. Either tell the story or go home!!