- Group Sex
- Wild Card Memories
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All Comments on 'Wild Card Memories'
by MWater
- 22 Comments
Anonymousabout 4 years agoNice and great one
Will it be a next chapter? I fell something about Becky maybe have a crush on Dani too.
amritaloverabout 4 years agoThanks for the great story. I look forward to more of your hot writing.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoMore please! more characters that were mentioned but not in the scene, maybe Rita's roommate to balance the couples without adding too many more dudes. perhaps some racial diversity? Hard to imagine college without some asian and Indian girls.
Nate pretty clearly slept with the MC's girlfriend Becky. If Nate and Sarah are a couple by the next chapter there could be some initial anger, then playful comeuppance.
I think these kinds of story need one seemingly innocent character. Sarah did a good job in this one, but will be full engaged next time.
The twist of Rita and the MC having a history was both original and unexpected. well done.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThe sex was good but this was not a well-written story. The very first sentence has tense disagreement (By our final year of college, the Friday night dinner has become a tradition for us." - "has" should be "had", especially since, for all main characters anyway, the final year of college had finished already), and the rest of the story is strewn with grammar errors, spelling mistakes, character description inconsistencies (Dani is first described as auburn and is later described as a brunette), and more tense disagreement. I can forgive the rare error because few people are perfect proofreaders (myself included), but when there are numerous errors on one single page, that's not a simple overlooking of a mistake while proofreading.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI actually think this was really well written. You had natural dialogue and your style of writing captured characterization pretty well.
zintelalmost 4 years agoLove stories like this. You should writ more with new characters.
CountingBlackSheepalmost 4 years agoLoved this. And I'm glad it's a standalone. Well done.
G5902almost 4 years agoWhat an incredibly well written and wonderfully hot story!!! I am one of the ones that wish you would share more stories. In the meantime, THANK YOU SO MUCH for sharing this fantastic story!
RobJasperover 3 years agoHot hot hot! Great physical descriptions, nice plot twists & terrific sex!
Anonymousover 2 years agoSome typos (it’s when it should be its) and incorrect uses of words (compliment and complement mean two different things) but otherwise a well written story. Good dialogue and hot sex.
