All Comments on 'Wild Cherries Ch. 02'

Still a good premise.

Still a good scene setting.

But the sex -- all of it -- was rushed and lacking in details, reactions.

He has her bare her breasts. Then what? He doesn't make much use of them. He doesn't tease them. He doesn't ask her if they're sensitive? And do they like to be played with? He doesn't tell her to play with them. And especially her nipples.

He has her lean over the desk and he fucks her. OK. But why doesn't he have her reach back, take hold of his cock, and put it into her own pussy?

Four stars.

For a short story, it was well written, but the sex was simple and could have been a lot more descriptive and interesting. I guess there will be more.