All Comments on 'Wild Flower Ch. 10'

the suspense was too much.....I thought lambert would die in the next georgous chapter of this TOPPER OF THE CENTURY STORY..but .............BOMB,mark shot him

i swear this chapter at first made me sympathetic with lambert,but when he started vomiting saying he fucked Angel and he enjoyed it..Man my evilness resurrected

good Angel didnt kill the children..But that bitch was really amoron...Can u imagine him slamming his cock as if fucking some one??As if he's in aholiday??

Hahahaha..Up to now am wondering how stupid lambert is..Huh,Miguell had spared his family but still the idiot insisted..Huh he even had guts to talk rubbish!!!,hahahaha but when i remember the way Angel shut him up by shooting the filthy shoulders hahahahahaha i never knew am that evil till when Angel shot the second chapter..B'coz thats what i kept praying for

thanks to chris7658,my mood was brightened up.

How did u see the house seen??Fantastic huh??..I mean Brian and Miguell in the mansion..I thought Brian loves Miguell but his attitude towards Chris made me get goose bumps in the stomach..I love Brian' brotherly attitude

have i told u how i LOVED seeing g..g-abriel and that toilet panic??heheh it may look simple but just seeing them panic to me its ecstacy.pleasure.Huh let them die in hell those vomits..And they'll get their doze soon,hehehe and thats from THE BEST CROWNED KING OF WRITERS,WATCH OUT U PITS

hahaha did u guys see how Angel ended up being taken home by my vanalas??..Hey get me right i mean christian..Haha i could see the chriguell combination already oh God the way he calls Angel 'hey beautiful' man it makes me hmmm..Hard(hey get me well i meant hardly in love,hahaha)that caring attitude,that georgous face of his.....oh did u guys see how Angel looked at Chris's pic??? hehehe the comment from Christian 'what?Do i look sexy?'hahahahaha man the guy is crazy the way i love him..How he wanted to enter Angel's mansion??,hahaha in conclusion how did u see the car scene??Uh???

How about Chris at Angello's place??? marvelous, uh??

But for sure Van give us achapter of Chris and Miguell only...I request for aromantic chapter Van plz,Christian should know about Miguell,and..Angel needs to love again for sure and thats Christian only not Lusty Brandon Alvarez

Antonio spencer get ready becoz it seems u're more greedy than the late lambert,hahaha

Hmmmmmmmmmmm...van plz in the next chapter tell me which name u choose for W.F stars

A.chriguell

B.migris

C.Angelian

D.Any of ur choice

I love dearly my love and thanks for theme songs i wont add on my king

post soon mwaaaaaaaaaaah

Antonio spenber.........Hehehehe

I meant spencer..Hahahaha

Great chapter as far as plot and character development. You have a wonderful imagination, and your stories are very exciting and suspenseful. I would suggest that you proof read first before you submit. I find a lot of little errors that can be easily fixed. You also might want to research some different adjectives. I find this a problem in my own writing as well, but the use of the same descriptive words over and over again becomes redundant. That's why I always keep a thesaurus near by, it's a wonderful tool for any writer to have. Over all though, wonderful story and was a real pleasure to read. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next chapter ~Chance~

Chance welcome home and thanks for the nice way of advising

Np. Kids been sick so didn't have a lot of time to finish reading and comment but by the grace of God they went back to school today lol

Ok I am hoping that the the whole “I hate you” dynamic between Miguel and Christian isn’t dragged out for a long time. You did that with Aidan and Luis before they became lovers and that is my one complaint about that story. Granted, Miguel and Christian are nowhere near as bad as those two. I am glad Lambert is dead. I’m not usually so evil but I’m happy he’s killed. I find it hilarious how ruled by his dick Antonio is! He’s going to find out how stupid that is.

thanks to the Lord chance ur kids are okay..now its time for our van

too bad iam going to school for my final year in senior secondary and.......I've not told van about it chance,am scared i may have littl time for my wonderful stories

Looking forward C

Such a great story! I am only sorry that Lambert wasn't raped brutally by Mark. He deserved the same treatment as Angelo, even worse.

Sorry you guys about the late post. I was really pissed while writing this chapter and i had no idea why. I have already posted another great chapter and get ready for fire. You've asked for romance and it shall be there.

By the way, the combination is either mistian or chriguell. i don't know. either of them

Sori van for that Baby,may God guide u in this,i cant wait my dear for the next chapter and......Since u've given the names,let the name be Chriguell...I love u,take care my King

damn even today no posting