by elbiscayne
Good story....and no over-sized body parts needed, either!
great story that moved along at the right pace. The right mixture of the erotic as well as the sexual.
Romance, humor, realism, eroticism and tattos! Great story, thanks for writing it!
The overall flow of your story was simply wonderful... minor editing needed, but in my book I generally try to overlook that for the feel of the story and yours gave me a wonderful feeling - I was glad your stories were recommended to me :)
The overall flow of your story was simply wonderful... minor editing needed, but in my book I generally try to overlook that for the feel of the story and yours gave me a wonderful feeling - I was glad your stories were recommended to me :)
Great story- nice description of the movement to lovers and the hesitations and plunge into full coupling