by Rouquie
LOVED it! I really hope you continue to write and create more stories!
Out of all the stories I have read, on this site and elsewhere, only one other has had all of the elements I love. I am happy to add yours to that exclusive list titled "I Freaking Loved This!"
Your writing style is easy to read, and descriptions detailed enough to create a mental picture of your characters. You have a better than average grasp of basic grammar, believable and likeable characters, and good character and plot developement. (Yeah, I know, I know; English major)
On a scale of one to ten, ten being "it changed my life" and one being "Spongebob Squarepants," I give you a solid 9.7. Keep writing!