All Comments on 'Wild Night In Vegas'

db_01 I have read almost all of your stories, but this is a masterpiece. thank you for writing it for all of to read. Passion, Rebecca, Don and Paula heated this story to the max. From the airport, on the plane to the suite of rooms non stop sex. It was well written.

While perusing the stories on Lit, I had to return and re-read the wonderful patterns of your mind in regards to our 'Wild Night in Vegas'.

I read the first half as Michael read the second, and once again our pleasure for the evening will be fulfilled as it was when we first read the story.

It was beautifully written, even I couldn't have done better. This piece was made for you and for you to put it together like this, well incredible is the only word that comes to mind.

Thank you!!

Paula T. Bartolome

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Paula_n_FriendsErotica

Well DB, I have to say that this a great read. The story just flowed from beginning to end. You have captured a part of these characters. I look forward to reading more of work work soon.

DCB