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Have you noticed that according to the scoring of your other endeavors people aren't buying what you're selling? Put this crap in sci-fi.

what exactly is this rambling? Really confusing what you are trying to write about, lot of giberish and not much else...... Put the drugs and alcohol away being drugged up and drunk is not helping your cause of embarrassing yourself. Nothing relatable here to reality. Not even a good dream could relate to this jumble of words.