All Comments on 'Wild Vacation'

Why wait till next summer. They can swap all year long.

Over the top but why not? Great fun.

Over the top, not very descriptive, could use proof reading, but fun.

I liked the story, but take time to develop your characters. It will improve the effect of the sex immensely.

Short but explicit story that gets the job done well.

This is good, 5*. I would have liked it more if it was a bit longer and more descriptive. Also would be good if it was easier to remember who is married to each other. I don't always like when the names are paired by the same first initial (Alex and Amy, Bob and Barb, etc) but you could use some other method to make it easier to remember.