All Comments on 'William Finds Love Pt. 01'

Looking forward to part 2!

Phenomenal as always

I didnt realize this was new and there is no pt 2 yet!! Great story, looking forward to pt 2 and maybe more

Classy, so well written and smartly characterised. Interesting, charming and unexpected, as so many of your stories are. I look forward to the next chapter!!!

Typical BrazenHorse fare: interesting, erotic, engaging, likeable characters you root for, well written to the point where you come to the end of the chapter and think to yourself, "It's over already?!?". In other words, marvelous. Your stories push many of my buttons, this one being no exception - my type of plot AND characters. Thank you!

Totally hot fun. Looking forward to more.

Good premise.

Decent story line.

Needs more dialog.

Would have been better if, when preparing to take the cock pictures, he needed 'help' to get hard and she had to 'help' him.

Needed some scenario where he had to admit he was a virgin.

Some questioning about how often he masturbated. And what kind of porn he watched. And what he imagined while he masturbated. And had he ever thought about her while he masturbated? And what did he imagine?

Four stars.